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Winter Break: An Odd Vacation

by: Binuya, M.,  Dungca, K.,  Agir, K.,  Guevarra, A.,  Pingol, K.

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          Winter Break: An Odd Vacation is an article that analyzes and reviews the contents of the short story Winter Break by Hilary Mantel by using three different literary approaches.

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WINTER BREAK: AN ODD VACATION

by: Binuya, M.,  Dungca, K.,  Agir, K.,  Guevarra, A.,  Pingol, K.

Pampanga, Philippines | December 9, 2021 | 4:08 p.m.

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          "Thud, thud, thud." There are sounds we plead to forget, moments we wish we could take back, and things we wish we could unsee. A short story that took place in a single taxi, yet who would have guessed so much could happen in just these moments? Winter Break is a story that everyone should not miss. This short story written by Hilary Mantel is a gripping ride of how a couple's mistakes led to a ghastly end. The story and its elements unveil the inherent value of Winter Break as a piece of literary art, the influence of the author's background to the story, and the unconscious desires of the author in her work. For the audiences to understand deeper and further widen their knowledge about the story, we used three literary criticisms that are best suited for the literary work: formalist, biographical, and psychoanalytic approaches.

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          The formalist approach features the literary elements in the story entitled 'Winter Break' by Hilary Mantel.  The author uses wordplays and figurative language, making the story intriguing and vividly creating an image emphasizing its theme. Correspondingly, the narrator made it seem that the "kid" mentioned was a goat, but it later revealed that it had another connotation. The story is narrated from a third-person point of view since the narrator does not partake in it, yet at some points, the characters' thoughts peek through, revealing their personality (Koopman, 2018). It takes place in a taxi at night, which helps set the story's mood. The protagonist, Phil, and his unnamed wife are a middle-aged couple. As part of the flashback in the story, Phil found the presence of small children unbearably agitating and is a manipulative husband to his wife (Vivancos, 2011). On the contrary, the antagonist is the taxi driver, an aloof character. The story has a non-linear narrative structure; it has flashbacks interrupting to give supporting background relevant to the characters and unfolding events. It starts when the couple gets into their taxi and makes their way to their vacation. Just right before arriving at their destination, they ran over something, then the driver got out, and he had a bundle in his hands that he put at the back of the car before getting in. The couple took notice of the driver's behavior. Then, they arrive at their destination, and what ensues next shocks the wife of Phil. It was the hand of a human child. It was an unexpected ending for a vacation story. One prominent motif of the text is darkness (Koopman, 2018). It is remarkable because it emphasizes the story's theme: a couple's uncomfortable journey to their vacation resort  (Vivancos, 2011).  

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          Hilary Mantel once mentioned how her mother moved her lover into their home, but her father did not move out until after four years. This memory from her childhood had a lasting impact on her. She also opened up about her struggles with her condition, leaving her unable to bear a child (Creighton, 2015). Given the author’s background, we can assume that her personal story influenced her to shape the story of Winter Break. The mother and father of the author mirror the relationship of the couple in the story, not in a way that one of them has another lover. Still, they parallel each other with the distance and the unconventional realities of their relationship. We can see the inconveniences in the couple’s marriage in their constant arguments about having a child and the passive-aggressive behavior of the husband towards the wife. As mentioned, the relationship of the author’s parents had a long-lasting impact on her; this explains how the bleak and stifling relationship of the couple impacted the grim ending of the child. If the author’s parents had settled their relationship healthily, they could have prevented the impact it made on their children. Likewise, if the couple did not let the driver get on with it, they could have probably saved the child. The husband also symbolizes the condition of the author. He hinders the wife from getting a child, just as the author has her condition restricting her from bearing a child. We can say that the horrors in the author’s experiences urged her to write this kind of story—haunting, dark, and gloomy. 

 

    The psychoanalytic approach conceptualizes the author's unconscious thoughts, feelings, desires, and memories (McLeod, 2019). The story revolves around a middle-aged married couple who has difficulties communicating with one another. Phil, the main protagonist, vividly says how he does not want to have a kid. On the other hand, her wife remained silent about wanting to have or not having a kid. Additionally, in the short story, it was mentioned, "We dress for the weather we want as if to bully it, even though we've seen the forecast." This statement suggests how Phil and his wife celebrate winter break as a summer break. However, the wife, choosing a fragile, ill-chosen winter holiday attire, refers to her marriage. She expected Phil would eventually agree to have children, although she already knew he probably would not (Cole, 2018). The author, Hilary Mantel, has endometriosis, a disorder in which tissue that acts like the womb lining appears outside the womb. Chronic discomfort and infertility are two of the disorder's symptoms (Creighton, 2015).  The author also said, "I had a volatile childhood - but I regret never having a family." Moreover, Mantel said that writing helped her enjoy her life and cured her of experiencing pain from her disease. Perhaps, Hilary Mantel’s unconscious desire is her longing to have a child. She may have also wanted the readers to focus and feel the frustrations, regrets, and tense feelings expressed in the story.

 

          Therefore, we conclude that the short story "Winter Break" can be deeply interpreted through these three criticisms: formalist, biographical, and psychoanalytic. Winter Break revolves around a couple who were intending to have a fun and relaxing vacation, but it turned out to be an uncomfortable experience. Hilary Mantel, best known for her bleak comics, wrote this short story. She employs wordplays and figurative language throughout the story, which makes her work more intriguing and gives a positive impact on each interpretation. She accomplishes her goal of depicting the difficulties she experienced in her life, in which she wants to have a kid but is unable to do so due to her condition, through writing. More than just recognition, Hilary Mantel's "Winter Break" conveyed to her readers some important values that made the narrative more interesting to read. This story ended with an open finale, leaving the readers to ponder various possible endings. It highlights how a middle-aged couple's inability to communicate effectively can lead to disastrous consequences. Winter Break has a wonderful message that adheres to all of us, emphasizing the importance of good communication.

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Cole, J. (2018). Venus and Mars on a Winter Break. Retrieved from http://thresholds.chi.ac.uk/venus-and

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Creighton, S. (2015). I had a volatile childhood - but I regret never having a family, says Hilary Mantel .

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Koopman, F. (2018). Engels short story “winter break” uitwerkingen. Retrieved from

https://www.studeersnel.nl/nl/document/vwo/engels-5e-klas/engels-short-story-winter-break-uitwerkingen/8111663

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Mcleod, S. (2019). Psychoanalysis. Retrieved from https://www.simplypsychology.org/psychoanalysis.html

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Vivancos, M. (2011). Story Sundays: “Winter Break” by Hilary Mantel. Retrieved from

https://novelniche.net/2011/10/09/story-sundays-winter-break-by-hilary-mantel/

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